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My Birthday PartyOctober 5, 2001 Every year for my birthday I have a party. I can only have parties until I am 14, but right now I am 12 years old so I have two more years of parties. Now I am going to tell you what kind of activities that I could do at my birthday parties. Before the parties I like to blow up balloons until I could not blow anymore. When I get tired of blowing then I tell my brother to take over and so my brother starts blowing the balloons for like 15 minutes. My brother comes to my room and tells me he can't blow any more, and I take over and then I started for ten minutes I was finished. I tell my mom she says go play video games while she's making the food so I start playing my favorite game Wrestlemania 2001 and I pick my favorite Olympic hero Kurt Angle vs. Stonecold Steve Austin, and so one hour later I stopped. I got dressed and got in the car and then went to go deliver invitations to people. I invited my best friends like Moses, J.R., Antonio, Joe, and some GIRLS YEAH!!!!!!!!!!! After I took the invitations I took a bath, got dressed, put gel in my hair, combed it, and put on my shoes and my jewelry. People call me Pimp JR. Then people started coming and I was outside. Then my friends came on their bikes with presents and they put the presents on the table, and I said want to wrestle? and they said yes. One by one I beat them with my finishing move, the Angle slam, and then Anthony came and we wrestled. I lost, but I beat everyone else. We start jumping on the trampoline making flips. I did a front flip, back flip, and side flip. I had to land on my stomach but it is hard. Once we got tired we started playing games outside like basketball, football, and maybe It. It's time to eat the cake. My mom lights the candles, brings cake inside the living room, and then I am right there at the center of the table sitting down. Everyone sings Happy Birthday, and then I blow the candles and then everyone eats cake. When everyone is finished I open my presents. Sometimes I get money, and I hope I do. After the party is over I have to take out the trash outside to the dumpster by Ball Elementary, and I have to take out maybe 3-4 bags full of garbage. Once I finish I go back inside my room, change again, and listen to S.P.M. That stands for South Park Mexican. They are my favorite. |
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