Nelsy

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When I Was in 6th Grade October 5, 2001 "Hi," I told the teacher. Then it was time to get in class. I was nervous because I was saying what if there are people that I don't know? Will they talk to me? I found out that I was in the green team they told me that it was the best team of all the teams. Then it was time to learn math. It was kind of boring then it was funny because some of the boys were acting dumb. Then the teacher was nice. She let us play games, and she said for us to talk to each other so we all could be friends. Well then time passed and there got the middle of the year well then one of my friends named Claudia Moreno got in a fight with another girl that was telling her things. Then sometimes we didn't listen to the teacher when she was teaching in class because we were playing with some balls of paper when she used to turn around to write in the board. Other times we used to go to the restroom and we used to be late to class by five to ten minutes. Some of my friends did bad stuff like a lots of them. But I can't say not even one of them. I had lots of best friends like Belen, Claudia, Faviola, and Carolina. We played with the volleyball and basketball against the boys. Sometimes we won but sometimes we lost. But about the best friends we were the only ones always together and never separated. Well when the last day of school came it was time to say goodbye to all of our best friends. Some were crying. But I really loved that year.

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