Raul

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The Wave Pool September 28, 2001 One Sunday I found a ticket to the wave pool. I asked my friend if he could go and he said yes. When we got there was a lot of people. I went to the restroom and put on my shorts and a shirt. I got my sandals and I went into the water. I saw a lot of waves and people. The water had a lot of Clorox and when you dive your eyes get red. When I got in the water I dived and I went with my friend and took off my sandals and laid them by the tree. When the waves were barely coming I went to the center and they took me and I fall down and when I got up a wave was coming and it dropped me again and I went to the tree and I wore my sandals. It was cool then the sun came out and it was hot. I was hungry and I asked my friend if he was hungry and I asked my friend to go to the store and buy some food and some drinks. When he got back I got the towel and I sit on it. He brought lots of things like hot chitos, Coca Cola, bean dip, hamburgers, hot dogs and nachos.

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